tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937860325126980689.post2679377506382376682..comments2009-07-12T14:25:31.899-04:00Comments on The Creative Writing Workshop: CharmYAWP Summer 09 Creative Writing Workshophttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01086671105201884404noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937860325126980689.post-45966314882935375472009-07-10T07:44:13.487-04:002009-07-10T07:44:13.487-04:00I would like you to work on the meter a bit--get i...I would like you to work on the meter a bit--get it in sync. If you were chanting this how would you change the words, delete prepositions etc to make the chant work?YAWP Summer 09 Creative Writing Workshophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01086671105201884404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937860325126980689.post-78557156711186827642009-07-09T23:22:24.520-04:002009-07-09T23:22:24.520-04:00Excellent work, especially with the rhyming, it ca...Excellent work, especially with the rhyming, it can be such a pain when you just can't find the right word to rhyme with another. Very relatable, I'm sure many people are often on a quest for knowledge. Loved it!Juliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11264742418388015389noreply@blogger.com