Thursday, July 9, 2009

Charm

What we seek and what we know
Are neither the same
So this I claim.

Release those secrets of time and space
and we will meet them face to face

Leaving thoughts of questions with confusions behind
To open now with a new mind

Knowledge is what we crave
It is our only desire
Grant it to us now
Before we tire

2 comments:

  1. Excellent work, especially with the rhyming, it can be such a pain when you just can't find the right word to rhyme with another. Very relatable, I'm sure many people are often on a quest for knowledge. Loved it!

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  2. I would like you to work on the meter a bit--get it in sync. If you were chanting this how would you change the words, delete prepositions etc to make the chant work?

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