Thursday, July 9, 2009


What we seek and what we know
Are neither the same
So this I claim.

Release those secrets of time and space
and we will meet them face to face

Leaving thoughts of questions with confusions behind
To open now with a new mind

Knowledge is what we crave
It is our only desire
Grant it to us now
Before we tire


  1. Excellent work, especially with the rhyming, it can be such a pain when you just can't find the right word to rhyme with another. Very relatable, I'm sure many people are often on a quest for knowledge. Loved it!

  2. I would like you to work on the meter a bit--get it in sync. If you were chanting this how would you change the words, delete prepositions etc to make the chant work?